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A story about brotherhood.....

Darth_Purrface

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Once, a young teenaged boy named Josh was bullying a small boy in a dark alleyway. "Gimme your money!" Josh said. "I don't have any money!" replied the boy, shouting. "If you don't give me any money I'll-" " No!", the boy pushed Josh harshly and tried to run, but in vain Josh grabbed the boy and beat him to a near death. A woman passing by bore witness to this gruesome act and soon called the police. Then she ran over into the alleyway and tried to break up the fight. The police soon entered the scene and handcuffed Josh while sending the little boy to hospital in a large ambulance. Josh felt the guilt in him as he boy's parents looked at him with great anger. The policeman that was sending him to a jail cell for his trial then asked him questions about what he was doing with his life? "Young man, what are you doing to yourself? Hitting young children doesn't count in making your life better." Josh was silent with guilt, tears running out of his eyes as he thinks of the monstrous thing he has done.

He then arrived at the police station, looking with horror at the strange men and women sitting in their cells all ruffed up and dirty. He was out into his cell, awaiting his confrontation with the judge that he always feared. Fearing the harsh punishment the judge had in store for him. Fearing the words that were said to similar kiss like him. When he reached his cell, he saw a man siting face down on the floor looking very glum. He sat down and trying to mind his own business, suddenly the man said, "Hey boy, what did you do to get here? Josh replied, "I beat a little boy so badly, can't believe what I done. What are you in for?" The man explained, "Killed my own loving wife is shear madness.Can't believe what I have done either. You know, I should learned to tolerate things long ago, but I just learned it now. Give you some advice, man is capable of love and mercy, it is probably the biggest reason humanity is still intact,use those two emotions as much as you can.", "Yeah, I guess I'll keep that in mind." After a few hours of waiting a policeman came and said, "Josh Parkinson, time for you to face justice in court." The man said, "Good luck with the judge boy, you will need it.", "Thanks, good luck with yours later."

Josh then arrives at the fancy court, filled with Greek styled pillars and endorsed with wooden plank floors, he walked into the courtroom with the judge looking at him with disappointment and disgust. Everyone else arrives including his family, defendants, the other family, etc. etc. The trial session soon started. "Josh Parkinson, you have been convicted with great violence. Tell me, why did you beat up a little boy?, "He-he pushed me sir." The people started gossiping between each other. The judge then angrily hits a "hammer" on the "nail". "Order in the court! Son, why did he push you?", "I bullied him sir.", "Bullied him for what?", "For money your honor, money so that I could buy a new expensive watch.", "Couldn't you ask your parents for money?", "They weren't able to afford it your honor.", "Son, you should have at least held a fund raising, helped your parents, gotten a part time job, anything! But bullying, this is absurd! We are all brothers and sisters and we all need to learn to love and tolerate. Some people have been gifted with great knowledge and strength! But what do we use it for? War, mocking people abusing people. stealing, murder, and much more! Boy, humanity would have never gotten to this level if man never had ability to love. Use that emotion, make your life better, make yourself like able and tolerate people's wrong doings! I want you to go to that hospital bed and apologize to him for what you have done. Then we will discuss your trial.", "Thank you your honor." He soon approached the boy's parents and shook hands with them even after his act. He then approached a police man and get out of the courthouse headed to a squad car on the way to the hospital, with a great shine of acceptance.......
 

Jazz007

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"love and tolerate"
I sense a faint underlying tone of ponies.

Regardless, I approve.
 

thee_pro

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Was difficult trying to figure out who was talking at different times because of the way it was written, but it was a good story. Might want to start a new line every time someone different says something. It will make it easier to read.
 

MrFrog90

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Tis' sad the little boy hasn't got an amphibian friend that eats flies that pass by above it all day.
 

Darth_Purrface

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Lol ConroD, I accept your decision regardless of the ""why". And hence like it for no reason.

Aaand for some reason this comment was multiplied.

Thee pro, I was using an iPad, not easy to write with it. XD
 

Godliberator

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but wait....the story has not ended, and why would the boy's parents want to shake his hand, and why would the boy he just hospitalized even want to forgive him for putting him in the hospital.....is the boy being actively sued by the boy's parents for damages and the hospital bills which were incurred....WHERE IS THE JUSTICE!!!
 

konflakes

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And as the boy grows older day by day, he is struck by the realization of his own mortality and impending demise. Hope is destroyed and his faith is lost. He wonders the streets at the age of 93, killing innocent lamp posts and defacating upon the totalitaristic establishment of the government whilst his army of domesticated ducks run circles around him, chanting their quacks.

As the boy, now an old man, faces judgement for his crimes, a single tear streams down his face. It was worth it after all. The mischief he had always wanted to play out as a child was now fulfilled as he breathed his last breaths. Acquitted due to his old age, the boy lies down in his bed, feeling life leave his body. With his last breath, he said it at last... "Penis..."
 
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