Holidays [WIP] Version 2.0

[mikeymagic]

https://soundcloud.com/forgondor%2Fholidays-revision-2-wip
gimme feedback pl0x

 

[Cacher]

Me likey
sounds.....
Indescribable


Edit:
If this was sold I would buy it (provided its longer)

 

[RemOfShadows]

me gusta this tho the bass seems a tad bit too low, and a bit uneven.

 

[mikeymagic]

@RemOfShadows, I didn't spend too much time on post production limiter stuff, but I'll sort that out next WIP release

 

[mikeymagic]

@Cacher97 haha thanks, I guess? ^_^

I'll probably finish this song unlike most because it's a really fun track to play with

 

[Donvittorio]

Im in love with the intro, so fucking in love
The chorus? not so much, The bass synth sounds so unclear and distorted, I would turn down the volume of that a bit and compress the drums so it has some more punch to it, not much though, because you probably like the drums to be soft here

 

[mikeymagic]

@Donvitorrio yano I've heard such a mixed opinion on the intro but I like it too haha, it's all about the subtleties eh? haha and the distorted bass and random shit fuzz everywhere is the terrible garageband limiter, I'll need to tweak shit for ages to make it right but eh It'll be fun. Also which bass synth? theres about 4 different ones >.<
and yeah the drums aren't meant to be D00FF D00FF D00FF I don't think haha

 

[Donvittorio]

Garageband? haha awesome, Justice used garageband in conjunction with Cubase for their songs

 

[mikeymagic]

Haha I'm trying to push garageband to it's full potential, slowly I'm building up an array of different instruments i've made but it's the biggest effort to make anything in GB sound okay haha. All the intruments sound shit vanilla.

 

[rsmv2you]

OH SWEET JIBLETS THIS PLEASES MY NIBBLETS!

 

[rsmv2you]

I NEED a longer version/full :3

 

[ollee]

I feel like in the chorus, your bass line has absolutely no attack...it like eases into each beat and makes the actual middle section feel all....'smeared' together. It lacks definition, I feel.

 

[AznInvazn]

Me likey the melodic concept; however i have to agree in the previous comments in the quality of your synths and drums. It needs more to it cause right now it seems too plain (almost like video game music, not saying that's a bad thing, but you know). Just add more to it. other than that, it's a purtay good start