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Another konflakes story blog!? "The Phallon Effect"

konflakes

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Hurrlow errybody! Its been a long time since I last wrote a story blog and although I know I haven't completed all of them, I've decided to start on this new one. Before you decide that this story is about penises because I used the word "Phallon" let me assure you it has nothing to do with penises. Almost.

So here we go~

The Phallon Effect


Prologue

In this world, there are 2 possibilities.
Events that have happened and events that have yet to happen.
What then of events that are happening?
What then of events currently occurring?

What if I told you that if an event is not yet completed, but will be completed, can be terminated?
What then determines that said event is to be terminated? By whom is it decided that the event is not to happen?

What if YOU could stop said events?


Chapter 1: A Normal Day

"Beep Beep Beep Beep Beep" The alarm rings as the minute hand hits the 12 o' clock position, signalling that it was now 7 a.m. and time to wake up.
Reaching over to his bedside without looking, Jack hits the alarm, lingers in bed for just a few more seconds before sitting up and rubbing the sleep from his eyes.

Morning begins like every other day, mundane and uneventful. Like every other morning, Jack wakes up and brushes his teeth, makes coffee and eats breakfast. Then at 8 a.m., he leaves for his work, as an IT specialist, in his car. Simple, normal, and regular.

As Jack drives past Avenue 6, sirens blare behind him. Looking into the rear view mirror, he sees that its the police.

Odd, thinks Jack, did I run a stop sign or a red light?

Pulling over at the side of the road, Jack rolls down the windows of his car as a police officer walks up alongside the car towards him.

"Registration and ID please.", demands the police officer.

"Uh, sure. Did I do something wrong officer?", asks Jack as he pulls out his documents from his glove box.

"Its fine sir. Just checking up on drivers.", he replies.

10 minutes pass from when the officer took Jack's documents to his car and radio-ed in to HQ for confirmation and Jack was getting impatient. Much longer and he would be late for work, which he had not been for the 6 years that he had been working for his company.

Looking in the rear view mirror to check on the police officer, Jack realises, with a start, that the officer was nowhere to be found. Jack turned around in his seat, looking around, trying to locate the officer, but to no avail. Hesitantly, Jack opened the door to his car, and took a step out, looking over the police car and over its sides. Slowly, he walked towards the car. As he gets nearer, he hears static from the radio and a female voice.

*bzzzzzzt* "Come in 45, are you there? This is dispatch, please respond" *bzzzzzzt*

Swallowing, Jack reaches into the car through the driver's window and picks up the radio and turns it on.

"Uhm, hel-hello?", Jack asked nervously.

*bzzzzzzt* "Hello, who is this? Where is Officer Burg?" *bzzzzzzt*

"I-I don't know! He pulled me over to check up on my documents and went back to this car with it. I've been waiting for 10 minutes and he's nowhere to be seen! Its as if he just upped and vanished!", replied Jack.

*bzzzzzzt*

"Hello?"

*bzzzzzzt*

"Hello?!"

*bzzzzzzt*

No replies are heard from the radio even as Jack shouts into it. Putting the radio down, Jack looks around the car for his documents, takes it and turns around to head back into his car, ready to return to his journey to work.

That is when he realises that there is someone seated in the backseat of his car.


To be continued...

Thanks for reading up to this point! Before chewing me out for grammar and my choice of present/continuous tense or w/e it is you call that tense, I do so because of what I've written in the prologue.

Feel free to leave comments and tell me how horrible it is! :D
 
I've decided that your blogs are too short. This is my only complaint - this couldn't be considered the first chapter of a short poem.
 
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