I'm going to launch an IndieGoGo campaign...

[JerzeyLegend]

and I'd like some feedback.

I need some super, SUPER serious people who will read over my campaign draft and pick out flaws and problems. Give feedback about how they felt, and be mature about the idea all together.

If you are SUPER serious, please reply below.

 

[Skryter]

I'd be happy to critique your campaign draft for you.

 

[NewspaperCrane]

I'll read it for you. Be prepared for me to be completely honest, probably brutally so.

 

[moondoggy23]

I'll read it.

 

[TheGurw]

Your grammar is terribad, your sentences run on longer than a Doctor Who episode, and you enjoy drinking low-grade corn syrup out of your father's rear.


Oh, I have to read it first? Pffft. Ain't nobody got time fo dat.


(I hereby offer my skills, as a super serious thing.)