Loks good so far, but Zone11 is all about the detail. Keep in mind that that doesn't always mean detail in the building, but detail overall. Try to focus on decorations a little more, and build on the interior design overall. Remember, everything in Zone11 is suppose to be as real and functional looking as possible. As long as you follow that route, you'll have no problem getting permitted. Good luck!
Also, I apologize for the lack of attention these applications have received. Many of us admin have been busy with real life events, but now that I am back, the turn around for the applications should be much better. Thanks for your patience!