Muffins. A MLP fan fic. (Dont read if Cupcakes gave you nightmares)

Wasn't all that disgusting to be honest, more stupid than disgusting but I still wish I stayed away from this thread.

I'm also not sure on whether this fan fic is breaking rule 8.

Btw I read cupcakes when I saw the title knowing what I was getting myself into, I'm scarred for life....
 
rsmv, You know i think very highly of you.. with that said... THIS IS SO HORRIBLE.. grammatical errors and typos aside, this was not very good.. I know you can do better.. just saying <3
 
Skryter said:
Wasn't all that disgusting to be honest, more stupid than disgusting but I still wish I stayed away from this thread.

I'm also not sure on whether this fan fic is breaking rule 8.

Btw I read cupcakes when I saw the title knowing what I was getting myself into, I'm scarred for life....
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Reverend_80 said:
rsmv, You know i think very highly of you.. with that said... THIS IS SO HORRIBLE.. grammatical errors and typos aside, this was not very good.. I know you can do better.. just saying <3
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I realized this is bad and reason I didn't correct grammar is because I know its bad. I decided to not do anything like this ever again and instead wrote this.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/3462/The-Story-of-Fluttershy,-Chapter-by-Chapter.

Please read this ^^ and pretend this thread doesn't exist. ;)
 
rsmv2you said:
Actually, please read it, I need a opinion on how terrifying it is. :)
please x3
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It's okay. I'm not really a pony fan but I could still understand the plot. I did like that there were multiple ways of torture, but it keeps annoying me that the only motive was a hate against oatmeal.. Also, Rainbow Dash's demise would have been a nice addition, but I understand that it was needed for parts such as: "She felt a sense of nostalgia from this" and where Derpy revealed Pinkie's little secret. Pretty good read, didn't expect to come by this sort of thing on t9k.
 
ZEROBIT4 said:
It's okay. I'm not really a pony fan but I could still understand the plot. I did like that there were multiple ways of torture, but it keeps annoying me that the only motive was a hate against oatmeal.. Also, Rainbow Dash's demise would have been a nice addition, but I understand that it was needed for parts such as: "She felt a sense of nostalgia from this" and where Derpy revealed Pinkie's little secret. Pretty good read, didn't expect to come by this sort of thing on t9k.
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I have made way better stuff then this. This was my first time at fan fic. This is bad, trust me. lol

Read this :)
This is a MLP twist I did of Band of Brothers. :)

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/3499/Herd-Of-Brothers
 
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