The Lonely

[Cathykiddo]

Every night, she heard him.

His whispery chuckle and soothing words filled her ears.

Yet the voice comforted her. It brought hope for a broken past. She felt safe, joyful, cared for even. The usual mixed feelings of love.

Such pleasantness.

It was then all her worries of the day snuck out and escaped into the night. When he left, the slippery goodbyes are what brought them back.

That was when The Lonely sealed her doom.

 

[that_taco_guy]

That... was... awesome.

 

[moondoggy23]

I didn't know you thought that much of our games of Words With Friends.

 

[Mariolink42]

Did she suicide?

 

[Fdbl]

Deep

 

[Projecto]

That's... chilling.

 

[Donvittorio]

..why does everyone think this is a depressing poem?
It obviously isn't

 

[Projecto]

Because I associate all the worries of the day slipping back into my mind with bad/sadness. I dunno, might just be me.

 

[Hawke]

@Don Obviously you didn't notice The Lonely, doom and "when he left"

 

[RemOfShadows]

i love how so much can be said with a few words, love this Cathy

 

[Donvittorio]

@Hawke Obviously you didn't notice that she showed the poem to me first before she posted it, explaining what she meant

 

[Hawke]

So I guess it's not that obvious if she had to explain it to you

 

[Cathykiddo]

Ladies, please. I wrote this at 2 in the morning xD

 

[RemOfShadows]

@Don i guess it depends on the person who reads it ;P

 

[Projecto]

Meh, the part where the narrator's worries come back still strikes me as negative. Maybe I'm just losing at the reading game, and perhaps "he" is still there and the return of the narrator's worries has yet to come?

 

[Mariolink42]

Well when I see the words "Lonely" and "Doom" in the same sentence it really doesn't strike me as a happy story. :s

 

[David]

This poem should have been played at the Royal Wedding in England

 

[Audi]

Much of teh sexy.

 

[Ustulo]

I find this very offensive towards radishes.

 

[katphish]

I don't get it.